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percentages of computers owned by people between 2002 and 2010 and their education level.

percentages of computers owned by people between 2002 and 2010 and their education level. PWDRj

The graphs above show the percentages of computers owned by people between 2002 and 2010 and their education level. In general, the percentages have risen gradually from about 55% in 2002 to nearly above 75% but it's a different story depending on education. People with no high school diploma have doubled up from about 20% in 2002 to over 40% in 2010. Similarly, high school graduates experienced a similar increase but not doubling in numbers as it started from a little over 35% to 65%. College students percentages were high in 2002 and have been increasing gradually when heading towards higher education levels. The gap went from 30% in unfinished college students to 25% in both bachelors and postgraduate degrees students. Overall, ownerships of computers have increased gradually and rising up at a fast pace especially for students continuing their higher education. They are becoming a necessity to further your studies and show no sign of stopping.

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