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The pie chart below shows the percentage distribution of types of garbage collected in woolan country in Queensland, australia.

The pie chart below shows the percentage distribution of types of garbage collected in woolan country in Queensland, australia. YgQ8r
The pie chart compares the propotion distribution of nine categories of waste collected in wolon nation in australia. From an overall perspective, the highest propotion of waste collected from the kitchen waste such as tea bags, peelings and others with 22%. The second highest garbage collected from the paper and cardboard by 20%. By contrast, the figure of garden waste is the lower than household and paper waste. Which is only 17%. On the other side, there are three types of garbage, which has equivalent percentage of waste. Galss, plastic and other by 8%; whereas textile and fines has create 7% of garbage in australia, which is higher than metals (3%). Overall, it is lucid that the propotion of kitchen waste create the largest amount of garbage in australia; while metal shown lowest percentage of waste than others.
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. From an
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with 22%. The second highest garbage collected from the paper and cardboard by 20%. By contrast, the figure of garden
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is the lower than household and paper
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. Which is
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side, there are three types of garbage, which has equivalent percentage of
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waste
.
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Galss
, plastic and
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other
by 8%; whereas textile and fines has
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7% of garbage in
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australia
, which is higher than metals (3%).
Overall
, it is lucid that the
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propotion
of kitchen
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waste
create the largest amount of garbage in
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australia
; while metal shown
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IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the percentage distribution of types of garbage collected in woolan country in Queensland, australia.

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