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the diagram below shows the process of milk production. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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Dịch thư The diagram explains the way in which milks are produced for the construction industry. Overall, it can be seen that milk is a man-made process with five main stages that starts with the grazing of cows to get milk and ends with the delivery of milks to supermarkets and shops. The first stage is when cows are grazed to feed on grass, afterwards the cows are brought into the barn to be milking machine within twice a day. After this stage is complete, that milking will be put in the refrigeration storage to freshen the product. By this stage, the milk tanker daily delivery to Dairy to the factory to start the production process. The next step is when we arrive at the factory, we will see the process from preparation to completion of the product. First, we start from the processing ingredients like cheese, cream and butter. In order to have delicious fresh milk, they have to go through a lot of processes to be able to create the milk pasteurized and then carefully packaged. Once the final stage has been completed, the milks will be transported to supermarkets and shops to supply to consumers.

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explains
 the way in which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milks
are produced
 for the construction industry.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
-made process with five main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 with the grazing of cows to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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milk
 and ends with the delivery of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milks
 to supermarkets and shops.

The first
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stage
 is when cows are grazed
 to feed on grass, afterwards the cows are brought
 into the barn to be milking machine within twice a day. After this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 is complete, that milking will be put
 in the refrigeration storage to freshen the product. By this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
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start
 the production process.

The next
 step is when we arrive at the factory, we will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the process from preparation to completion of the product. First
, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 from the processing ingredients like cheese, cream and butter. In order to have delicious fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
, they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 go through This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 processes to be able to create the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 pasteurized and then carefully
 packaged. Once the final You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 has been completed
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milks
 will be transported
 to supermarkets and shops to supply to consumers. 