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The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. VaJQ
The pie chart and the table give information about why farmland was becoming degraded in the world and in 3 countries, namely - North America, Europe and Oceania during the 1990s. It is clear that the principal reason for global land degradation was due to overgrazing and deforestation. In the same year, we can also see that the European damaged agricultural land the most among three regions. Looking more closely at the pie chart, we can see that 35% of land destroyed in the world during the 1990s were for overgrazing. This figure followed by deforestation and over-cultivation, which accounted for 30% and 28% respectively. On the contrary, there was 7% of land that was degraded for other reasons. According to the table, in Oceania, overgrazing was the significant reason for destroying farmland with 11. 3%, which doubled the figure for Europe (5. 5%). Besides, 7. 7 % of land vitiated for over-cultivation purpose in Europe, making it the highest statistic in this discipline. Interestingly people in Oceania did not cut down farmland for this reason. The proportion of reducing agricultural land for deforestation was also highest in Europe, at 9. 8 %. Besides, the figure for North America ranges from 3. 3 % to 1. 5% in these 3 causes. Finally, in the 1990s, damaging farmland was most popular in Europe, which was 23% of agricultural land that was cutted down. This figure was twice and 4 times higher than the statistics in Oceania and North America.
The pie chart and the table give information about why
farmland
was becoming degraded in the world and in 3 countries,
namely
-
North America, Europe and Oceania during the 1990s.

It is
clear
that the principal reason for global
land
degradation was due to overgrazing and deforestation. In the same year, we can
also
see
that the European damaged agricultural
land
the most among three regions.

Looking more
closely
at the pie chart, we can
see
that 35% of
land
destroyed
in the world during the 1990s were for overgrazing. This
figure
followed by deforestation and over-cultivation, which accounted for 30% and 28%
respectively
.
On the contrary
, there was 7% of
land
that
was degraded
for other reasons.

According to the table, in Oceania, overgrazing was the significant reason for destroying
farmland
with 11. 3%, which doubled the
figure
for Europe (5. 5%).
Besides
, 7. 7 % of
land
vitiated for over-cultivation purpose in Europe, making it the highest statistic in this discipline.
Interestingly
people
in Oceania did not
cut
down
farmland
for this reason
. The proportion of reducing agricultural
land
for deforestation was
also
highest in Europe, at 9. 8 %.
Besides
, the
figure
for North America ranges from 3. 3 % to 1. 5% in these 3 causes.
Finally
, in the 1990s, damaging
farmland
was most popular in Europe, which was 23% of agricultural
land
that was
cutted
down. This
figure
was twice and 4 times higher than the statistics in Oceania and North America.
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IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

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