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The chart below give information about the high-speed continuous internet connection of households in five countries in 2001 and 2002.

The chart below give information about the high-speed continuous internet connection of households in five countries in 2001 and 2002. VaXQ
The bar chart and the table illustrate the percentage of domestics who had access to high-speed Internet in 5 countries from 2001 to 2002. As can be seen in the chart, high-speed Internet became more popular throughout the period. Besides South Korea and the USA had by far the highest number of users in both years, however, the most significant change was recorded in Britain. To begin with, in 2001, about 12. 2% of Korean domestics connected with high-speed Internet and it increased merely to more than 13. 44%, a growth of 2%. The USA had the second biggest number of high-speed Internet users in 2001, however, in 2002, it soared and reached a peak of 25. 11%, which was the highest figure of the chart. In terms of Germany, Switzerland and Britain, the proportion of high-speed Internet from these three countries was below 0. 4 % in the starting year, which is far lower than in South Korea and the USA. Nonetheless, the proportion of high-speed Internet connection in these 3 countries witnessed a substantial rise in 2002, whereas, below 11% of people from these three countries accessed this type of Internet. The percentage change of British families doubled statistics of American, which was 230% and 170% respectively.
The bar chart and the table illustrate the percentage of domestics who had access to
high-speed
Internet in 5
countries
from 2001 to 2002.

As can be
seen
in the chart,
high-speed
Internet became more popular throughout the period.
Besides
South Korea and the USA had by far the highest number of users in both years,
however
, the most significant
change
was recorded
in Britain.

To
begin
with, in 2001, about 12. 2% of Korean domestics connected with
high-speed
Internet and it increased
merely
to more than 13. 44%, a growth of 2%. The USA had the second biggest number of
high-speed
Internet users in 2001,
however
, in 2002, it soared and reached a peak of 25. 11%, which was the highest figure of the chart.

In terms of Germany, Switzerland and Britain, the proportion of
high-speed
Internet from these three
countries
was below 0. 4 % in the starting year, which is far lower than in South Korea and the USA. Nonetheless, the proportion of
high-speed
Internet connection in these 3
countries
witnessed a substantial rise in 2002, whereas, below 11% of
people
from these three
countries
accessed this type of Internet. The percentage
change
of British families doubled statistics of American, which was 230% and 170%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The chart below give information about the high-speed continuous internet connection of households in five countries in 2001 and 2002.

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