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The diagram shows the relationship between a numbers of different languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the relationship between a numbers of different languages. E8Qb
This graph shows various types of languages and how they are connected to each others. It is clear from the diagram that there are two vital types of english language american and british english branches. According to what is shown that american english branch located in two locations USA and Canada. Moreover, there are tow subtypes of Canada branch angelophone and francopho. However, there are six several types of languages located in USA such as philipines, samoa, west and north coas, mid-southern and o-rico. In other hand, british branches are located across the world in Indies, Pakistan, Africa, Australasia, and Far east. In addition, each branch location has sub locations. In fact, the Indian-Pasktan branch has the highest number of subtypes. To sum up, we could say that english language is located around the world in several locations. However, british english branch has more number of branch than anerican branch.
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languages
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are connected
to each
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others
. It is
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clear
from the diagram that there are two vital types of
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english
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language
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american
and
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british english
branches.

According to what
is shown
that
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american english
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branch
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located
in two
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locations
USA and Canada.
Moreover
, there are tow subtypes of Canada
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branch
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angelophone
and
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francopho
.
However
, there are six several types of
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languages
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located
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in USA
such as
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philipines
,
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samoa
, west and north
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coas
, mid-southern and
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o-rico
.

In other hand,
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british
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branches
are
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located
across the world in Indies, Pakistan, Africa, Australasia, and Far east.
In addition
, each
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branch
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location
has sub
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locations
.
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In
fact, the
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Indian-Pasktan
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branch
has the highest number of subtypes.

To sum up, we could say that
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english
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language
is
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located
around the world in several
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locations
.
However
,
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british english
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branch
has more number of
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branch
than
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anerican
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branch
.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the relationship between a numbers of different languages.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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