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The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart illustrates the causes of land degradation worldwide. On the other hand, the given table depicts three regions( North America, Europe, Oceania) affected with less productive agricultural land during the 1990s. Although over grazing was the main reason of land degradation with 35%. However, deforestation was just 5% less than over grazing. Over cultivation was responsible for nearly 30% and other causes which affected agricultural lands productivity were 7%. Oceania was the only region, having 0% over cultivation and overall land degradation of 13%. North America out of total 5% land degradation had least 0. 2% deforestation as the reason and the highest 3. 3% land degradation was due to over cultivation and half of it 1. 5% because of over grazing. Out of the three nations, highest land degradation is suffered by Europe almost 25%. Whereas, North America had just 5% land degradation rate. The pie chart clearly depicts the main factor as over grazing for the worldwide land degradation.
The pie chart illustrates the causes of
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with less productive agricultural
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during the 1990s.

Although
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grazing was the main reason of
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5% less than
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agricultural
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productivity were 7%.

Oceania was the
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region, having 0%
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cultivation and
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of 13%. North America out of total 5%
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had least 0. 2% deforestation as the reason and the highest 3. 3%
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land
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was due to
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cultivation and half of it 1. 5%
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grazing.

Out of the three nations, highest
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by Europe almost 25%. Whereas, North America had
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rate. The pie chart
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grazing for the worldwide
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IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

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