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The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart illustrates important reasons of agricultural land becoming less useful. The table explains the various causes that affected different regions of the world in 1990s. In light to the pie chart, it depicts worldwide land degradation causes wherein the maximum part is of over-grazing with 35%, followed by deforestation, the second last is due to over-cultivation and lastly because of other reasons. The table shows land degradation by region causes, the maximum total land degraded is in North America, which is 23%, whereas the least can be seen in the north America region, which is 5% and the middle region stands to 13% which is Europe. Overall the two charts, discuss the main causes of land degradation worldwide and region wise also focusing on the four main reasons of land degradation that are firstly, over-grazing, secondly, over-cultivation, thirdly, deforestation and lastly due to various other reasons.
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becoming less useful. The table
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In light to the pie chart, it depicts worldwide
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land
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degradation
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causes
wherein the maximum part is of over-grazing with 35%, followed by deforestation, the second last is due to over-cultivation and
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The table
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land
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degradation
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, the maximum total
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degraded is in North America, which is 23%, whereas the least can be
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in the north America
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, which is 5% and the middle
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stands to 13% which is Europe.

Overall
the two charts, discuss the main
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causes
of
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land
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worldwide and
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wise
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focusing on the four main reasons of
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, deforestation and
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due to various other reasons.

IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

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