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The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar graph illustrates the percentage of individuals going to cinemas on different days during the week in one European nation. Although, in 2003 the most voted day was Saturday(45%) whereas, the least liked was Monday with 10%. Friday and Sunday were preferred equally with 30%. Lastly, Tuesday and Thursday reamined almost same around 20%. In the year 2005, The maximum preference was given to Saturday's at 45% and least to two days wednesday and thursday. The percent of the year 2007 showed some similar trends Saturday's at peak more than 40% and least preferred wednesday(8%) follwed by Monday with more than 10%. Tuesday and Wednesday had same votes at slightly less than 20%. During all the three years, the highest percentage of people go for a movie on Saturday's. On the other hand, Monday is the least preferred day of the week. And Friday remained constant at 30% throughout.
The bar graph illustrates the percentage of individuals going to cinemas on
different
days during the week in one European nation.

Although, in 2003 the most voted day was Saturday(45%) whereas, the least liked was Monday with 10%. Friday and Sunday
were preferred
equally
with 30%.
Lastly
, Tuesday and Thursday reamined almost same around 20%.

In the year 2005, The maximum preference was
given
to Saturday's at 45% and least to two days wednesday and thursday. The percent of the year 2007
showed
some
similar trends Saturday's at peak more than 40% and least preferred wednesday(8%) follwed by Monday with more than 10%. Tuesday and Wednesday had same votes at
slightly
less than 20%.

During all the three years, the highest percentage of
people
go for a movie on Saturday's.
On the other hand
, Monday is the least preferred day of the week. And Friday remained constant at 30% throughout.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
150 words
7.0
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