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The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land beco

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The pie chart displays the major causes of less productive agricultural land. And, The table displays how three regions of the world between 1990 and 1999 were affected by these causes. In the pie chart, The highest percentage of causes of global land degradation is over-grazing and the lowest is over-cultivation. In the table, Europe has the most overall land degradation. while, North America has the lowest percentage. In the pie chart, Over-grazing is the major reason which is contributed to 35% of global land degradation, but over-cultivation is 28% of global land degradation The region whose land is degraded the most is Europe with 9. 8 % due to deforestation. On the other hands, North America has low impact from land degraded which is only 5 %.
The pie chart displays the major causes of less productive agricultural
land
. And, The table displays how three regions of the world between 1990 and 1999 were
affected
by these causes. In the pie chart, The highest percentage of causes of global
land
degradation is over-grazing and the lowest is over-cultivation. In the table, Europe has the most
overall
land
degradation.
while
, North America has the lowest percentage.

In the pie chart, Over-grazing is the major reason which
is contributed
to 35% of global
land
degradation,
but
over-cultivation is 28% of global
land
degradation

The region whose
land
is degraded
the most is Europe with 9. 8 % due to deforestation. On the other hands, North America has low impact from
land
degraded which is
only
5 %.
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IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land beco

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