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the maps illustrate the structure of ISLIP town center in recent times and in the future dates

the maps illustrate the structure of ISLIP town center in recent times and in the future dates OlBpN

The layout of Islip town at present and its projected developmental plan are portrayed in the given maps. The town, at present has some shops on either side of the main road which crosses it from West to East. All the establishments are opposite to the countryside, which is at the North. The residential area in the town is at the South, between a school which is located towards the West and a park at the East. Both have access to the main road. The plan is an enclosed town inside a dual carriage way, which has access points (entry and exit) at both East and West. The new establishments anticipated are a bus station, a shopping centre and a car park, which would replace the existing shops at the North of the main road. The main road, which is the present landmark, is set to be transformed to a pedestrians way. Two new accommodation facilities are expected to the existing ones. Overall, it is clear that the developmental plan of the Islip town would serve its residents the best.

The layout of Possible spelling mistake found.SlipISIPI slipIs lip
Islip
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 at present and its projected developmental plan are portrayed
 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 maps.

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town
, at present has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 shops on either side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprimemajorcentralpreeminentleadingprimary
main
 road which crosses it from West to East. All the establishments are opposite to the countryside, which is at the North. The residential area in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 is at the South, between a school which is located
 towards the West and a park at the East. Both have access to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprimemajorcentralpreeminentleadingprimary
main
 road.

The plan is an enclosed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 inside a dual carriage way, which has access points (entry and exit) at both East and West. The new establishments anticipated are a bus station, a shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 and a car park, which would replace the existing shops at the North of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprimemajorcentralpreeminentleadingprimary
main
 road. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprimemajorcentralpreeminentleadingprimary
main
 road, which is the present landmark, is set
 to be transformed
 to a pedestrians way. Two new accommodation facilities are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to the existing ones.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the developmental plan of the Possible spelling mistake found.SlipISIPI slipIs lip
Islip
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 would serve its residents the best. 