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the maps illustrate the structure of ISLIP town center in recent times and in the future dates

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The layout of Islip town at present and its projected developmental plan are portrayed in the given maps. The town, at present has some shops on either side of the main road which crosses it from West to East. All the establishments are opposite to the countryside, which is at the North. The residential area in the town is at the South, between a school which is located towards the West and a park at the East. Both have access to the main road. The plan is an enclosed town inside a dual carriage way, which has access points (entry and exit) at both East and West. The new establishments anticipated are a bus station, a shopping centre and a car park, which would replace the existing shops at the North of the main road. The main road, which is the present landmark, is set to be transformed to a pedestrians way. Two new accommodation facilities are expected to the existing ones. Overall, it is clear that the developmental plan of the Islip town would serve its residents the best.
The layout of
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Islip
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town
at present and its projected developmental plan
are portrayed
in the
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maps.

The
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town
, at present has
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some
shops on either side of the
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main
road which crosses it from West to East. All the establishments are opposite to the countryside, which is at the North. The residential area in the
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town
is at the South, between a school which
is located
towards the West and a park at the East. Both have access to the
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main
road.

The plan is an enclosed
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town
inside a dual carriage way, which has access points (entry and exit) at both East and West. The new establishments anticipated are a bus station, a shopping
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centre
and a car park, which would replace the existing shops at the North of the
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main
road.
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The
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main
road, which is the present landmark,
is set
to
be transformed
to a pedestrians way. Two new accommodation facilities are
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expected
to the existing ones.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the developmental plan of the
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Islip
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town
would serve its residents the best.
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IELTS academic the maps illustrate the structure of ISLIP town center in recent times and in the future dates

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