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The pie chart and the table show the types of living accommodation occupied by 25-year-olds in London during the 1990s and the 2010s and the availability of different types of accommodation in London during the same two periods.

Compared to the 20th century, a person develops, builds new houses, new types of houses and increases their number. For comparison, we can take the statistics of London. Compared to 1990 and 2010, people prefer to live separately than with someone or with their parents. As the first two diagrams show us, the number of people living in an apartment with someone has decreased by 5 times. The number of people living with their parents has decreased 1. 5 times. The number of people living alone in an apartment has grown by almost 1. 5 times. Which suggests that in 2010 people prefer solitude. According to the second table, we can understand that people in 2020 prefer huge private houses rather than apartments and houses with several rooms. The number of apartments and houses with several rooms has decreased by 3 times. Houses and apartments with 3-4 rooms remained on the same level. Which speaks about their demand. If you compare the diagram and the table, you can see the similarity in the statistics as indicated in the table, active home users are growing, which can be seen in the diagram. And apartment users are decreasing. Therefore, I believe that the information of both sources is similar.
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number
of
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living with their parents has decreased 1. 5
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suggests that in 2010
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prefer solitude. According to the second table, we can understand that
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in 2020 prefer huge private
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and
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with several rooms. The
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and
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with several rooms has decreased by 3
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with 3-4 rooms remained on the same level. Which speaks about their demand. If you compare the diagram and the table, you can
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users are decreasing.
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, I believe that the information of both sources is similar.
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IELTS academic The pie chart and the table show the types of living accommodation occupied by 25-year-olds in London during the 1990s and the 2010s and the availability of different types of accommodation in London during the same two periods.

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