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The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart gives information about the population of Japan from 1950 to 2015 and also make the prediction for 2035 and 2055. The table provide the details of number and percentage of people of Japan who are above the age of 65 in the year 1950 and 2005. It also makes prediction for 2035 and 2055. Overall, the chart illustrates that the peak of their population comes in 2010 and it starts decreasing 2010 onwards. It is predicted that alomost 2/5 of their population will be in the category of senior citizen in 2055. In 1950, around 84 million people were there in Japan. in subsequent years ( 1950-2010), it increased continously and reached its peak ( 127. 8 million). From 2010 onwards, a downward trend can be observed. It is predicted that, population will decrease significantly in 2035 and 2055 and it will reach to 89. 9 million which is around only 6 million extra from 1950 ( 84. 1). However, these figures does not represent the percentage of different age group of total population. But we can get this data from the table. In 1950, only 4. 9% (4. 1 million) people were above 65 years of age and this number increases to 20% in 2005. Predictions suggest that, this number will increase in the coming years to almost 41. 0% in 2055. Although, the total population is only 6 million more than what was there in 1950, number of people above age of 65 is huge.
The chart gives information about the
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of Japan from 1950 to 2015 and
also
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make
the prediction for 2035 and 2055. The table
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provide
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details
of
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number
and percentage of
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people
of Japan who are above the
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age
of 65 in the
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year
1950 and 2005. It
also
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prediction for 2035 and 2055.

Overall
, the chart illustrates that the peak of their
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population
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comes
in
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2010 and
it
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starts
decreasing 2010 onwards. It
is predicted
that
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alomost
2/5 of their
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population
will be in the category of senior citizen in 2055.

In 1950, around 84
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million
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people
were there in Japan.
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in
subsequent years
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(
1950-2010), it increased
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continously
and reached its peak
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(
127. 8
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million)
. From 2010 onwards, a downward trend can
be observed
. It
is predicted
that,
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population
will decrease
significantly
in 2035 and
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2055 and
it will reach to 89. 9
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million
which is around
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only
6
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extra from 1950
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(
84. 1).

However
, these figures does not represent the percentage of
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different
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age
group of total
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.
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But
we can
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this data from the table. In 1950,
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only
4. 9% (4. 1
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million)
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people
were above 65 years of
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age
and this
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number
increases to 20% in 2005. Predictions suggest that, this
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number
will increase in the coming years to almost 41. 0% in 2055. Although, the total
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population
is
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only
6
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million
more than what was there in 1950,
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number
of
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people
above
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age
of 65 is huge.
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