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the maps below show the centre of small town called islip as it is now, and plans for its development. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The top picture describes recent conditions of Islip town and the bottom picture shows the planning of Islip town centre in the future. It can be seen from the maps that future Islip town will have a massive changes from the roads to the new areas nearby. The most upgrade will be the main road increases to dual carriageway, that provides more efficiency through the areas. One of the shops across the main road and the countryside will change to four brand new sections which are bus station, shopping centre, car park, and new housing. Behind the old shops will be build with a new residences, however due to the new road build the park will decreased. Further more for the school and the previous housing will be south across the new streets. In addition to that, the main road will rebuild to pedestrian only as the centre of Isly town centre.
The top picture
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Islip
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town
and the bottom picture
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shows
the planning of
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Islip
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town
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centre
in the future. It can be
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seen
from the maps that future
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Islip
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town
will have a massive
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changes
from the
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roads
to the
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new
areas nearby.

The most upgrade will be the main
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road
increases to dual carriageway, that provides more efficiency through the areas. One of the shops across the main
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road
and the countryside will
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change
to four brand
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new
sections which are bus station, shopping
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centre
, car park, and
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new
housing. Behind the
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old
shops will be build with a
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new
residences,
however
due to the
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new
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road
build the park will
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decreased
.
Further
more for the school and the previous housing will be south across the
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new
streets.
In addition
to that, the main
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road
will rebuild to pedestrian
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only
as the
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centre
of
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Isly
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town
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centre
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IELTS academic the maps below show the centre of small town called islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

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  American English
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152 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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