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The pie chart and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.

The pie chart and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000. Bb5V
The tabulation illustrates the value of fish in billions of dollars imported to the US, while pie chart describe the information about sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000. Overall, at the beginning period the US was imported less then end of the period; meanwhile, they are generating good amount of dollars by the time while superior exporter was Canada at the initial stage and it decreases by the time. However, china and others are gaining their export to the US. To began with in 1988 the US was imported fish which was valued 6. 57 billion dollars by the time passes they are gaining in impotation of fish to 10. 72 billion dollars in 2000. To the beganing of time in 1988 canada was held prime source of import. while, decreases by the time 34% and 42% in 1992 and 2000. However, other was improving their percentage to importing fish in the US and china was also gaininig importing in20% and 30% in 1992 and 2000.
The tabulation illustrates the value of fish in billions of
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dollars
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imported
to the US, while pie chart
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describe
the information about sources of fish
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imported
to the US between 1988 and 2000.

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, at the beginning period the US was
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imported
less
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then
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end
of the period; meanwhile, they are generating
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good
amount of
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dollars
by the
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time
while superior exporter was Canada at the initial stage and it decreases by the
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time
.
However
, china
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and others
are gaining their export to the US.

To began with in 1988 the US was
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imported
fish which
was valued
6. 57 billion
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dollars
by the
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time
passes they are gaining in
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impotation
of fish to 10. 72 billion
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dollars
in 2000.

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beganing
of
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time
in 1988
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canada
was held
prime source of import.
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while
, decreases by the
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time
34% and 42% in 1992 and 2000.
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, other was improving their percentage to importing fish in the US and china was
also
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gaininig
importing in20% and 30% in 1992 and 2000.
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IELTS academic The pie chart and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.

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