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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram shows how a type of tent called a tepee is built. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how a type of tent called a tepee is built. qlXX

The above drawing describes how many major stages in order to make a kind of tent is named a tepee. First of all, a rope is used to tie three long sticks together. Then, they are required to raise by pulling the end of the rope to form a tripod. When three of sticks are standed stably in the land, we add more sticks to the tripod. The following this, the rope will be wrapped the end of around all the sticks. The next step is that a canvas is used to cover around another sticks. After that, the sticks are moved to against the tripod structure and unwrap the canvas into the tepee. Then, metal pins are applied to attach the end of the canvas together. Finally, we are going to fix the bottom of the canvas to the ground. At the moment, the tepee is completed and ready to ultilize. In summary, there are 8 basic techniques to build up an type of tent. The beginning with prepareness some utensils and seeking an empty area to then set it up.

The above drawing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizesportrays
describes
 how This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 major stages in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a kind of tent is named
 a tepee.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, a rope is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to tie three long You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
sticks
 together. Then, they are required
 to raise by pulling the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the rope to form a tripod. When three of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
sticks
 are Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "stood", the past tense form of the verb 'stand'?stoodstrandedsandedstandeestander
standed
stably
 in the land, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
sticks
 to the tripod. The following this, the rope will be wrapped
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of around all the sticks.

The next
 step is that a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtarpaulintarp
canvas
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to cover around another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
sticks
. After that, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
sticks
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to against the tripod structure and unwrap the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtarpaulintarp
canvas
 into the tepee. Then, metal pins are applied
 to attach the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtarpaulintarp
canvas
 together. Finally
, we are going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 the bottom of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtarpaulintarp
canvas
 to the ground. At the moment, the tepee is completed
 and ready to Possible spelling mistake found.utilize
ultilize
.

In summary, there are 8 basic techniques to build up Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
 type of tent. The beginning with Possible spelling mistake found.preparedness
prepareness
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 utensils and seeking an empty area to then set it up. 