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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram shows how a type of tent called a tepee is built. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how a type of tent called a tepee is built. qlXX
The above drawing describes how many major stages in order to make a kind of tent is named a tepee. First of all, a rope is used to tie three long sticks together. Then, they are required to raise by pulling the end of the rope to form a tripod. When three of sticks are standed stably in the land, we add more sticks to the tripod. The following this, the rope will be wrapped the end of around all the sticks. The next step is that a canvas is used to cover around another sticks. After that, the sticks are moved to against the tripod structure and unwrap the canvas into the tepee. Then, metal pins are applied to attach the end of the canvas together. Finally, we are going to fix the bottom of the canvas to the ground. At the moment, the tepee is completed and ready to ultilize. In summary, there are 8 basic techniques to build up an type of tent. The beginning with prepareness some utensils and seeking an empty area to then set it up.
The above drawing
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describes
how
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many
major stages in order to
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make
a kind of tent
is named
a tepee.

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First of all
, a rope is
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used
to tie three long
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sticks
together. Then, they
are required
to raise by pulling the
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end
of the rope to form a tripod. When three of
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sticks
are
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standed
stably
in the land, we
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add
more
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sticks
to the tripod. The following this, the rope will
be wrapped
the
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end
of around all the sticks.

The
next
step is that a
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canvas
is
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used
to cover around another
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sticks
. After that, the
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sticks
are
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moved
to against the tripod structure and unwrap the
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canvas
into the tepee. Then, metal pins
are applied
to attach the
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end
of the
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canvas
together.
Finally
, we are going to
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fix
the bottom of the
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canvas
to the ground. At the moment, the tepee
is completed
and ready to
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ultilize
.

In summary, there are 8 basic techniques to build up
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an
type of tent. The beginning with
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prepareness
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some
utensils and seeking an empty area to then set it up.

IELTS academic The diagram shows how a type of tent called a tepee is built.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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