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The pie charts and table give information about the total value and source of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.

The pie charts and table give information about the total value and source of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000. 2mMj

The pie charts illustrate information about source of fish brought to the US and the table depicts data of total cost in same nation from 1998 to 2000. Units are measured in billions and percentage. Overall, in the pie charts, at the beginning of the period, China was the least segment of the economy, while Canada was made the highest contribution. Also, in the table, the value of dollars were rose at the end of the period. To begin with, in the year 1988, Canada was the highest part of the source around three-fifths, while it was gradually dropping about 34% in the second year. Whereas, importing fish had been decreasing in the year 2000. Moreover, the number of fish import in others was climbed rapidly from 27% to 46% in the first two years. Despite Others source were increased in two years, it had been declining approximately 42% at the enfd of period. It can be clearly seen that, in table the cost of fish was accounting for 6. 57 billions in the year 1998 expended to a merely 8% in the year 1992. However, the expenditure was largest on 10. 72 billions in the year 2000.

The pie charts illustrate information about source of fish brought to the US and the table depicts data of total cost in same nation from 1998 to 2000. Units are measured
 in billions and percentage.

Overall
, in the pie charts, at the beginning of the period, China was the least segment of the economy, while Canada was made
 the highest contribution. Also
, in the table, the value of dollars were rose at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period.

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begin
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year
 1988, Canada was the highest part of the source around three-fifths, while it was gradually
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year
. “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whereas
, importing fish had been decreasing in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2000. Moreover
, the number of fish import in others was climbed
rapidly
 from 27% to 46% in the first
 two years. Despite Others source were increased
 in two years, it had been declining approximately 42% at the Possible spelling mistake found.endEnidENDENF
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 of period.

It can be clearly
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seen
 that, in table the cost of fish was accounting for 6. 57 billions in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1998 expended to a merely
 8% in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1992. However
, the expenditure was A determiner is probably missing here: "the largest".the largest
largest
 on 10. 72 billions in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2000. 