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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100, 000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below Writing task 1 9JOX

The first table provides the information about people in the UK who traveled abroad and the purpose behind their visit for a period of 5 years from 1994 to 1998. The second bar graph provides us the data about the destination they traveled to during the same period. Overall, the number of people who are traveling abroad is increasing. A large number of people are going abroad to enjoy their Holidays. Most of the people visit Western Europe from the UK. Firstly, a plethora of people are visiting abroad to spend their holiday period. In 1994 the value is 15, 246 this value increased gradually making it to 20, 700 by the end of 1998. Similarly, the number of people who visited abroad for business growing in 1994 the value is 3155, by the end of 1998 the value is nearly 4000. The number of people who visited abroad for other reasons doesn't show any trend it is fluctuating. The number of people who visited western Europe has reduced in 1995 when compared to 1994, the value in 1994 and 1995 are 19, 000 and 17, 000 respectively. Finally, People rarely visit North American states and Other Areas.

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. Finally
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People
 rarely visit North American states and Other Areas. 