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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. ylKM

The line graph illustrates arrival of holiday makers touring a Caribbean Island from 2010 till 2017. Overall, total number of traveler had drastically increased in a span of seven years. There are more outsiders staying on Cruise Ship rather than moving out and experiencing the Island. The Y-axis indicates the millions of visitors visiting a Island. Firstly, approximately 0. 6 millions of tourists had stayed on ship between 2010 and 2011. However, it went down by almost 0. 1 millions of outsiders who likely to stayed on ship. After 2012, the number had been rise till end of the period given. It highlighted that travelers preferred to remain on ship instead of walking and finding new scene on Island. Coming to the next point, about 0. 16 millions of visitors enjoyed being on Island between year 2010 and 2011. In addition to that, number of tourists visiting had gradually went up over 1 millions. After 2012, arrival of travelers remained constant for the consecutive of 3 years with almost of 1. 5 millions of people. However, it reduced and picked up certain number with approximately 1. 5 millions at the end of the period. Finally, total seems to be expanded throughout the years. From 2010 till 2015, quantities of visitors had steadily increased and stabilized at certain quantity of tourists almost 2. 8 millions in 2016 and climbed up with a difference of about 0. 7 millions of outsiders in 2017.

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from 2010 till 2017
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 in 2016 and climbed up with a difference of about 0. 7 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 of outsiders in 2017. 