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The pie chart about 1990 to 2021

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The two pie chart illustrate the percentage of electricity production of France in 1990 and 2010 by using different energy sources. In 1990 year, the most significant source of energy was nuclear power which together acquire for about quarter over production of energy, while in 2010, it was just 4% and become the smallest production comparing other sources. In all types of energy production was a dramatic change between 20 years period. In contrast, Natural gas saw a big drop in supply from 28% in 1990 to mere 4% in 2010, nuclear power as source of energy claim at 17% in 1990, while it showed slight decreased by 2010 comprising 67% of electricity production In France. Both oil and coal enjoy of relatively lower percentage of 22%, 28% (1990) and 13%, 13% (2010) respectively. Apart from that Hydropower source captured nearly lowest proportion in both year 15. 6% and 2% in 2010 consequently. Overall, it is clear that nuclear power secure most relied on form energy for production electricity in
The two pie chart illustrate the percentage of electricity
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of France in 1990 and 2010 by using

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In 1990 year, the most significant source of
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was nuclear power which together acquire for about

quarter over
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of
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, while in 2010, it was
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4% and become the smallest production

comparing other sources. In all types of
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was a dramatic
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drop in supply from 28% in 1990 to mere 4% in 2010, nuclear power as

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claim at 17% in 1990, while it
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slight decreased by 2010 comprising 67% of

electricity
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In France. Both oil and coal enjoy of
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(1990) and 13%, 13% (2010)
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. Apart from that Hydropower source captured
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proportion in both year 15. 6% and 2% in 2010
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