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Comparison of how urban Chinese spent across major categories in 1995 versus the spending habits in 2011

Comparison of how urban Chinese spent across major categories in 1995 versus the spending habits in 2011 e3OrG

The given pie chart represents the chinese people daily usage intake difference over 1995 to 2011. Spending habits for chinese community are seen majorly changing over these years. let's find out where it got changed. It can be observed from the pie chart that chinese citizen are deprioritizing food interest from 50% to 36% and giving more focus on transportation by adding 9% more with reference to two pie chart given with compares to all others expendesure. along with it, Slight difference is found in clothing by 3% decreased. similary, medicine intake got increased by 4%. also recreation and residential showing little upsurged by 2% and 1% respectively. At the end for household facilities no change found. in the coclusion, we found that intake for food is majorly changed which is advantage for chinese citizen as food consumption should be less to avoid health issues. whereas transportation is showing more lights. however, medicine intake is upsurged which is more concerning area for chinese goverment.

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