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People from different ages giving money to the charity

People from different ages giving money to the charity BYp0V

As we can see in the chart that they gave us we can notice that not everyone gives money to charity, not even half of every age population, another thing that the chart tell us very clearly is that the older the people are the more individuals start giving money to charity, and that sounds pretty logical to me as they only have themselves to take care off, money may not be a problem to them and they start thinking about the ones who need them the most, and with that being said we can see that the youngest generations are the ones that have a less or smaller number of population or individuals that put their money into the charity of their preference, in some cases of the chart we can observe that the young ones with the time passing stoped their contribution to charity leaving them with a lower percentage.

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