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The pictures show the process of making string hoppers.

The pictures show the process of making string hoppers. pXR0L

The diagrams illustrate the stages in the production of string hoppers food. There are six main steps involved in cooking, beginning with grinding the rice and ending with serving with other seasonings stage. First of all, the rice is put on the grinder and ground into the flour smooth. Then, little water or milk is added to the flour and formed into a dough. After that, the dough is pressed by hands evenly, and squeezed through small holes of taking equipment into noodles. At the same time, the noodles are laid on different mats, which are small wood plates with minor holes, and following this step, the noodles on the mats are steamed until they are ready. Finally, the string hoppers are presented on a medium-sized plate with three seasonings served. In conclusion, the process of making string hoppers is essential in order to create good cuisine.

The diagrams illustrate the stages in the production of string hoppers food. There are six main steps involved in cooking, beginning with grinding the rice and ending with serving with other seasonings stage.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the rice is put
 on the grinder and ground into the flour smooth. Then, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 water or milk is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the flour and formed into a dough. After that, the dough is pressed
 by hands evenly
, and squeezed through This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 holes of taking equipment into noodles. At the same time, the noodles are laid
 on This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 mats, which are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 wood plates with minor holes, and following this step, the noodles on the mats are steamed
 until they are ready. Finally
, the string hoppers are presented
 on a medium-sized plate with three seasonings served.

In conclusion
, the process of making string hoppers is essential in order to create This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 cuisine. 