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Rate of smoking in USA for 40 years

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According to this point chart, we can get relatively accurate information about smoking rates in the United States between 1960 and 2000. Given this comparison, in my view, because of the importance of the father in the upbringing of children, hardworking fathers who have smoked in the United States due to mental or physical problems or any other disability have fortunately been able to quit using drugs and Reduce smoking rates dramatically, contribute to the strength of their own family foundation. Comparing between about 700 male and 300 female addicts, we found that men were more successful in quitting industrial and traditional drugs. But from 1975 to 1985, women went through a steady period of addiction for ten years. These numbers are just one number for the people of the United States, but psychologically, each number in this chart represents a weak man or woman who can tear down the foundation of a whole family. If the respected parents who are starting to use these incendiary substances know from the beginning what they are doing to themselves and their families, surely the society can see less people addicted to drugs, which is important. It requires the day-to-day efforts of the United States Broadcasting Corporation to report the disadvantages and side effects of drug use.

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