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The pictures map plan illustrates the changes of a tiny township in Islip after a number of developments during a 5 years period 2005 and 2010

The pictures map plan illustrates the changes of a tiny township in Islip after a number of developments during a 5 years period 2005 and 2010 PEXOX

in the next five years, the most significant change was the appearance of the highway and the main road was covered into a walking street. In the North of pedestrian area, the chains of shops was completely demolished. In this are, the bus stop and parking was construcsted, between these two areas was an shopping mall. A new residential area was also redeveloped and people can access it through a small road connected to the highway.

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