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The bar chart and table compares the percentage of customer satisfaction with national airline services and aspect of flying experience in the United State, namely courtesy of flight attendants, courtesy of check-in/gate agents, price of tickets, schedules, comfort of seats, from 1999, 2000 to 2007.

The bar chart and table compares the percentage of customer satisfaction with national airline services and aspect of flying experience in the United State, namely courtesy of flight attendants, courtesy of check-in/gate agents, price of tickets, schedules, comfort of seats, from 1999, 2000 to 2007. r6kdo
The bar chart and table compares the percentage of customer satisfaction with national airline services and aspect of flying experience in the United State, namely courtesy of flight attendants, courtesy of check-in/gate agents, price of tickets, schedules, comfort of seats, from 1999, 2000 to 2007. As can be seen, the satisfaction rate is always superior to the dissatisfied rate and the satisfaction with other factors over the years will be increasing. Meanwhile, courtesy of flight attendants plays a major role, in contrast, ticket price and seat comfort only hold the minority. In 8 years, the customer satisfaction rate increased from 65% in 1999 gradually increased to 69% in 2000 and reached 72% in 2007. Meanwhile, the dissatisfaction rate gradually decreased from 32% in 1999 decreased to 29% in 2000 and after 7 years reduced by another 5%. According to the table data, the percentage of courtesy of flight attendants is always the highest with 88% in 1999, 90% in 2000 and 92% in 2007. followed by the percentage of courtesy of check-in/gate agents at 87%. in 1999, in 2000 increased to 89 & but decreased slightly to 88% in 2007. However the percentage of comfort of seats remains the lowest at only 47% in 2007.
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with other factors over the years will be increasing. Meanwhile,
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, ticket price and seat comfort
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increased from 65% in 1999
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of flight attendants is always the highest with 88% in 1999, 90% in 2000 and 92% in 2007.
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of comfort of seats remains the lowest at
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47% in 2007.
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IELTS academic The bar chart and table compares the percentage of customer satisfaction with national airline services and aspect of flying experience in the United State, namely courtesy of flight attendants, courtesy of check-in/gate agents, price of tickets, schedules, comfort of seats, from 1999, 2000 to 2007.

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