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The pictures below shows the information regarding museum in 1998 and after some changes was made in 2008.

The pictures below shows the information regarding museum in 1998 and after some changes was made in 2008. kxewd

The given map shows that how much the museum had changed from 1998 to 2008. Overall, the garden, permanent exhibition rooms and the entrance and exit was on the same place in the both years. Is crystal clear that the ticket, entrance and exit of the Museum was in the west side and left hand side in the year 2008. By passing entrance, there was a garden in the centre of the Museum in 1998 but in 2008 the garden was at same location but there new things was built like fountains and Cafe area for the visitors. while, from the gate of entrance and exit, there was a temporary exhibition room in 1998 but in 2008 it was shifted in the left hand side of the garden and on the place of exhibition drones the shops and of bags and coats were shifted from the right hand side. Probing further, in the year of 1998 there was a cafe opposite the garden in the east side. On the contrary, in the 2008 WC was constructed along with the cafe. lastly, the permanent rooms of exhibition was at the same location in the both years.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 map This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 that how much the museum had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 from 1998 to 2008. Overall
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
, permanent exhibition rooms and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
 and exit was on the same place in the both years. Is crystal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the ticket, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
 and exit of the Museum was in the west side and Did you mean the adjective "left-hand"?left-hand
left hand
 side in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2008. By passing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
, there was a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 of the Museum in 1998 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in 2008 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 was at same location This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there new things was built
 like fountains and 'Cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"Café
Cafe
 area for the visitors. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhile
while
, from the gate of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
 and exit, there was a temporary exhibition room in 1998 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in 2008 it was shifted
 in the Did you mean the adjective "left-hand"?left-hand
left hand
 side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 and on the place of exhibition drones the shops and of bags and coats were shifted
 from the Did you mean the adjective "right-hand"?right-hand
right hand
 side. Probing further
, in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 of 1998 there was a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 opposite the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 in the east side. On the contrary
, in the 2008 WC was constructed
 along with the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLastly
lastly
, the permanent rooms of exhibition was at the same location in the both years. 