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The pictures below shows the information regarding museum in 1998 and after some changes was made in 2008.

The pictures below shows the information regarding museum in 1998 and after some changes was made in 2008. kxewd
The given map shows that how much the museum had changed from 1998 to 2008. Overall, the garden, permanent exhibition rooms and the entrance and exit was on the same place in the both years. Is crystal clear that the ticket, entrance and exit of the Museum was in the west side and left hand side in the year 2008. By passing entrance, there was a garden in the centre of the Museum in 1998 but in 2008 the garden was at same location but there new things was built like fountains and Cafe area for the visitors. while, from the gate of entrance and exit, there was a temporary exhibition room in 1998 but in 2008 it was shifted in the left hand side of the garden and on the place of exhibition drones the shops and of bags and coats were shifted from the right hand side. Probing further, in the year of 1998 there was a cafe opposite the garden in the east side. On the contrary, in the 2008 WC was constructed along with the cafe. lastly, the permanent rooms of exhibition was at the same location in the both years.
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changed
from 1998 to 2008.
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, the
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garden
, permanent exhibition rooms and the
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entrance
and exit was on the same place in the both years. Is crystal
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that the ticket,
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entrance
and exit of the Museum was in the west side and
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left hand
side in the
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year
2008. By passing
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entrance
, there was a
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garden
in the
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centre
of the Museum in 1998
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in 2008 the
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garden
was at same location
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there new things
was built
like fountains and
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Cafe
area for the visitors.
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while
, from the gate of
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entrance
and exit, there was a temporary exhibition room in 1998
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but
in 2008 it
was shifted
in the
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left hand
side of the
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garden
and on the place of exhibition drones the shops and of bags and coats
were shifted
from the
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right hand
side. Probing
further
, in the
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year
of 1998 there was a
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cafe
opposite the
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garden
in the east side.
On the contrary
, in the 2008 WC
was constructed
along with the
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cafe
.
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lastly
, the permanent rooms of exhibition was at the same location in the both years.
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IELTS academic The pictures below shows the information regarding museum in 1998 and after some changes was made in 2008.

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