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The line graph given illustrates how many people living in Australia born in Asia, the UK, and other regions within 35 years, starting from 1976.

The line graph given illustrates how many people living in Australia born in Asia, the UK, and other regions within 35 years, starting from 1976. WqY00

The line graph given illustrates how many people living in Australia born in Asia, the UK, and other regions within 35 years, starting from 1976. Overall, while the quantity of people living in Australia born Asia increased significantly, the number of population in Australia born the UK saw a dramatic reduction. Meanwhile, a fluctuant trend was recorded in the quantity of residents in Australia born the other and total countries. In 1976, the number of inhabitants in Australia born Asia accounted for about 2. 5%. This figure rose to 15% by the end of the period. An opposite downward trend was seen the quantity of population in Australia from the UK, which declined from approximately 13% in 1976 to 5% in 2011. At the beginning of the period, the number of residents in Australia from the other countries registered about 11%. This figure reached to around 12. 5% after experiencing certain flluctuation. A similar fluctuant trend was recorded in the quantity of people living Australia from the total countries, which decreased from about 23% to 20% before rising to exactly 25% by the end of the period.

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