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the diagrams below show the development of a small fishing village

the diagrams below show the development of a small fishing village 86x5w

The given chart illustrates the information about the changes that happened to the fish village between the 3 decades. Overall, it is evident that the village is now changes to tourist result. Moreover, the population size increased from 12, 000 to 80, 000. There were new buildings emerged in the sides of sea. Furthermore, woodland and villages were disappeared and a big golf course builts in that place. A large number of hotels emerged. In addition, pastures and olives were replaced farmland which used for the cultivation of vegetables for the hotel and also tourist shop also been established there. The seaside is been extended by creating beaches there. And also a new road is constructed across the village for travelling from other areas.

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changes
 that happened to the fish You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
 between the 3 decades.

Overall
, it is evident that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
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now
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changes
 to tourist result. Moreover
, the population size increased from 12, 000 to 80, 000.

There were new buildings emerged in the sides of sea. Furthermore
, woodland and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
villages
were disappeared
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big
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builts
 in that place. Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use "many" or "numerous"ManyNumerous
A large number of
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, pastures and olives were replaced
 farmland which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for the cultivation of vegetables for the hotel and also
 tourist shop also
been established
 there. The seaside is been
 extended by creating beaches there. And also
 a new road is constructed
 across the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
 for travelling from other areas. 