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Illustrated apparently from the map is the reconstruction of a bookstore in 2000 compared to now.

Illustrated apparently from the map is the reconstruction of a bookstore in 2000 compared to now. qakQa

Illustrated apparently from the map is the reconstruction of a bookstore in 2000 compared to now. First of all, while the places for travel books, new books and service desk were kept stably near the front door, other shelves were relocated. Namely, in 2000, fiction, which were put along the left wall from the entrance and a half of the back wall, occupied the majority of books. Meanwhile, that bookshelf is now divided into three equal areas for art, cookery and fiction books with the back space for non-fiction. One more noticeable change of the bookstore is that at the bottom right corner of the room where non-fiction books used to be, a cafeteria is built with larger area. Last but not least, the location of hobbies, art and cookery is now replaced by a round table with four chairs for readers with no longer hobbies books. Overall, despite an enormous change of the location, the diversity of book types in this bookstore has been remaining from years, and the reading area are overwhelmingly improved.

Illustrated apparently
 from the map is the reconstruction of a bookstore in 2000 compared to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, while the places for travel You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
, new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
 and service desk were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
stably
 near the front door, other shelves were relocated
. Namely
, in 2000, fiction, which were put
 along the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 wall from the entrance and a half of the back wall, occupied the majority of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
. Meanwhile, that bookshelf is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 divided into three equal areas for art, cookery and fiction You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
 with the back space for non-fiction.

One more noticeable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 of the bookstore is that The usual prepositions to use with a corner "in" not "on". Did you mean "in the bottom right corner"?in the bottom right corner
at the bottom right corner
 of the room where non-fiction You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be, a cafeteria is built
 with larger area.

Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, the location of hobbies, art and cookery is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 replaced by a round table with four chairs for readers with no longer hobbies books.

Overall
, despite an enormous This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 of the location, the diversity of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
book
 types in this bookstore has been remaining from years, and the reading area are overwhelmingly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
. 