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How solar powered pump works.

How solar powered pump works. gAxA7
The diagram explains the ways in which solar water pumping works. Overall, this process consists of three steps starting with converting solar energy into electricity, which is further used in running a motor pump, ending with supplying water from a large tank to the village. The first step is placing solar panel at a high place where the sun rays fall directly onto its shields. This solar panel contains photovoltaic cells which get Charged up easily from sun rays. Next, the direct current (DC) from this panel supplies to a bore pumper machine which is placed merely above the Earth's surface. Regarding the second stage, the bore pump undergoes through a bore well and pumps out the groundwater to the surface. As this process goes on and at the same time the water is taken out from the motor through a pipe. Finally, the process ends with storing water in a container from where it will supply to the village
The diagram
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explains
the ways in which
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solar
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water
pumping works.
Overall
, this process consists of three steps starting with converting
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solar
energy into electricity, which is
further
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used
in running a motor pump, ending with supplying
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water
from a large tank to the village.

The
first
step is placing
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solar
panel at a high place where the sun rays fall
directly
onto its shields. This
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solar
panel contains photovoltaic cells which
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get
Charged up
easily
from sun rays.
Next
, the direct
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current
(DC) from this panel supplies to a bore pumper machine which
is placed
merely
above the Earth's surface.

Regarding the second stage, the bore pump undergoes through a bore well and pumps out the groundwater to the surface. As this process goes on and at the same time the
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water
is taken
out from the motor through a pipe.
Finally
, the process ends with storing
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water
in a container from where it will supply to the village
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IELTS academic How solar powered pump works.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
159 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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