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The line graph illustrates the migration of people from countryside to urban regions in three different countries and predictions for future years.

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The line graph illustrates the migration of people from countryside to urban regions in three different countries and predictions for future years. Overall, the flow of people from rural to urban areas in three countries have been witnessing upward trends and are predicted to continue until 2025. Although, the figure of Iranians moving from rural to urban regions were the lowest in the beginning when comparing to Indonesia and Russia, the forecast shows that the amount of Iranians moving ro urban areas will surge and surpass both the others. In 2000, the quantity of people moving from countryside to urbans area in Iran and Indonesia were nearly equal with around 10 millions, and that figures for Rusia about 15 millions. From 2000 to 2010, the amount of Russian moving from urban areas were increase significantly to over 40 millions. In additions, there was a considerable growth in the movement of Iranians from rural to urban regions to 35 millions, while that figures for Indonesians only climb slightly to about 20 millions. From 2010 to the present, the flow of people from countryside to urban areas in Indonesia have continued previous trends to about 30 millions. While, both countries Russia and Iran have been the people moving from rural to urban areas increase remakably, however, Iran suddenly has surged and leading intersection at 75 millions between two countries. After the intersection, there is a anticipation of a significant increase in the data of Iran, which becoming the one with the highest amount of people moving to urban areas in 2025 of 95 millions. While, Russian moving to urbans areas will climb moderately, and in Indonesia that figures are predicted to levell off at round 30 millions.
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from countryside to
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regions in three
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and predictions for future years.

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from
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urban
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in three
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have been witnessing upward trends and
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to continue until 2025. Although, the
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figure
of Iranians
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regions were the lowest in the beginning when comparing to Indonesia and Russia, the forecast
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that the amount of Iranians
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ro
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will surge and surpass both the others.

In 2000, the quantity of
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urbans
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in Iran and Indonesia were
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Rusia
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. From 2000 to 2010, the amount of Russian
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were increase
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. In additions, there was a considerable growth in the movement of Iranians from
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regions to 35
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for Indonesians
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in Indonesia have continued previous trends to about 30
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. While, both
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Russia and Iran have been the
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