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The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram illustrates how tomato ketchup is made. First, tomatoes are picked by hand and sorted out which can be used for further productionand which should be rejected. After, delivering in factory seeds, skin and stalk is removed. Also, after putting it in a container it is crushed and later seasoning is added. The flowing step is bolling and after the mess is done it is left to cool down for a couple of hours. When tomatoes are no longer hot bottles are filled up with mess and labeling is added on packages. Then the product goes to quality control where it is checked for any defects. After passing control ketchup is packed in boxes for delivery. When lorry is packed the delivery process is started. Finely, boxes with ketchup go to a supermarket where customers buy them for further purposes. The most common purpose is to use ketchup as a sauce for fries with a hamburger.

The diagram illustrates how tomato You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
is made
.

First
, tomatoes are picked
 by hand and sorted out which can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for further
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productionand
 which should be rejected
. After, delivering in factory seeds, skin and stalk is removed
. Also
, after putting it in a container it is crushed
 and later seasoning is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
. The flowing step is Possible spelling mistake found.bowlingrollingbillingboilingpollingtolling
bolling
 and after the mess is done
 it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 to cool down for a couple of hours. When tomatoes are no longer hot bottles are filled
 up with mess and labeling is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 on packages. Then the product goes to quality control where it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 for any defects. After passing control You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
is packed
 in boxes for delivery. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 lorry is packed
 the delivery process is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
. Finely
, boxes with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
 go to a supermarket where customers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 them for further
 purposes. The most common purpose is to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
 as a sauce for fries with a hamburger. 