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The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.

The graph under certified a lot of money per week spent on fast food in England. The chart certified the trends in expenditure of fast food. according to graph one we looked expenditure on fast foods by income groups to have high income, average income and low income for hamburgers, fish and chips and pizza consumption. The first is reason that graph shows highest consumption was hamburgers about occupied 42 pence per person per week, and average income send hamburgers around 33pence person per week, low income consumption was to occupy 14 pence per person per week, besides, pizza expenditure was largest high income approximately 20 pence per person per week, and average income occupied 12 pence per person per week, low income was smallest for consumption pizza only was high income third one. lastly, high income and low income fish and chips consumption was steadily approximately 16pencen per person per week but average income was mostly about 25pencen per person per week. The chart two shows expenditure of fast foods, beside, hamburgers until soar in 1970-1980 to rise steadily when had huge amount of fluctuation increasing around term in1980-1990, in addition, pizzas consumption kept steady rising, lastly, fish and chips until decline stable. In conclusion, chart one and chart two consumption fast food hamburgers was highest people who were high income and hamburgers consumption kept increasing condition in 1970-1990, second consumption was pizza also to keep growing, finally, fish and chips expenditures was to decline condition.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.

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