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The diagram shows how electricity is generated by a hydroelectric dam.

The given diagram illustrates the basic principles of producing electricity through a hydroelectric dam, which is called hydroelectricity. Overall, it can clearly be seen that the element that is crucial in this procedure is water, which is a renewable energy. It is trapped in a reservoir before entering the process. The process entails some essential devices such as a generator, penstock, turbine and a long distance power lines. The procedure starts with loading the water to the system through an intake which is connected to a long pipe called a pension. After which, the water is transferred to a generator with the pressure of a turbine underneath it. The generator, which is powered by the powerhouse, is where the process of turning water into electricity happens. The resulting electricity is then moved into a long distance power lines in order to be distributed to wherever the power is needed.

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