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The picture shows the technique of making red wine.

The picture shows the technique of making red wine. oxV0V
The diagram illustrates how red wine is produced. As can be seen, there are ten steps in this linear process, starting with selecting grapes and ending with bottling the wine. The production commences when grapes are picked and selected. After this, those grapes are kept in an anaerobic condition for 2 to 3 weeks before being put through a crushing machine and transferred to the pot ale for fermenting with their skin. The process continues with the grapes having their skins and seeds removed. These by- products are then pressed again in the drainer to extract more juice. In the next step, the grape juice, clean from skin, is stored in another pot ale where the second fermentation process takes place. Following this, the liquid is clarified before being encased into an oaken cask for the maturation stage which lasts from 6 to 24 months. Having been mixed with acid and sugar in the taste adjustment process, the liquid is bottled and ready for sales.
The diagram illustrates how red wine
is produced
. As can be
seen
, there are ten

steps in this linear process, starting with

selecting grapes and ending with bottling

the wine.

The production commences when grapes

are picked
and selected. After this, those

grapes are
kept
in an anaerobic condition

for 2 to 3 weeks
before
being put
through

a crushing machine and transferred to the

pot ale for fermenting with their skin. The

process continues with the grapes
having


their
skins and seeds removed. These by-

products are then pressed again in
the


drainer
to extract more juice.

In the
next
step, the grape juice, clean

from skin,
is stored
in another pot ale

where the second fermentation process

takes place. Following this, the liquid
is clarified
before
being encased
into an

oaken cask for the maturation stage

which lasts from 6 to 24 months. Having

been mixed
with acid and sugar in the

taste adjustment process, the liquid
is bottled
and ready for sales.
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165 words
6.0
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