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describe a bar chart that shows the number of animal adoption

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This bar chart shows the number of animals that have been adopted in 10 years and above in Madison and wiscousin from an animal rescue center. It is clear from the graph that the number of the adopted cats is increasing by time. According to what is shown, in 1990 adopted dogs were in the highest rate for 580 but it became less in 1996, then in 1998 to 2000 its still the same in a rate of 400 While in the adopted cats we can see a huge raise from 1990 to 2000 adopted cats raised sharply from 340 to 670. As we can see the number of adopted birds and reptiles doesn’t get more than 200 from the ninteens to twintes, The highest raise for adopted birds and reptiles was in 1990 and 1996, Except these years the rate of the adopted birds and reptile is similar To sum up, we could say that adopted cats number is increasing by time.

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 from the graph that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
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 cats You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
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