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The charts below show that reasons why some people choose to leave the u.k,and some people choose to stay in the u.k.

The charts below show that reasons why some people choose to leave the u. k, and some people choose to stay in the u. k. VYrV3
The pie charts illustrates thw information about the causes why some mortals leave the U. K, and why some masses live in the United Kingdom. From overall analysis, it can be seen that the quality of life is the prime reason why people leave the U. K. However, the family and friends is the big reason for staying in U. K. Having a quick glance on the pie chart, it is crystal clear that the 37% people leave U. K for quality of life which is followed by financial reasons as a 24%. The 18% masses leave U. K due to lack of employment. Moreover, the 12% individuals leave U. K beacuse of the weather and only 9% people leave United Kingdom due to their family and friends relationship. Moving to rest of the information, it is noticed that the 43% people stag in that nation because of their family and it is followed by social life as 21%. Additionally, ghe proportion of employment and financial eeasons is same as 15%. The 11% mortals live in U. K because of language.
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IELTS academic The charts below show that reasons why some people choose to leave the u. k, and some people choose to stay in the u. k.

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