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The picture illustrates the way in which water is recycled in various forms from flows to air known as rainwater artificial cycle.

The picture illustrates the way in which water is recycled in various forms from flows to air known as rainwater artificial cycle. Qll8y
The picture illustrates the way in which water is recycled in various forms from flows to air known as rainwater artificial cycle. Two primary processes are clarified on the diagram in which one consisting of three phases water input to human usage and the second made up of two stages of the liquid extracted to nature. Initiating at the rain absorbance, raindrops are collected in dams which then be transported to water treatment plant for purification process in order to be qualified drinking water sent to households. Other common ways to reuse rainwater are applied is to store tanks or recycle water right at home. At the water extraction to nature, household wastewater will be gathered into plants to be treated carefully before emitted into rivers. Otherwise, stormwater in homes can be managed professionally in order to provide the sufficient materials for the completion of rainwater reuse cycle.
The picture illustrates the way in which
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is recycled
in various forms from flows to air known as rainwater artificial cycle.

Two primary processes
are clarified
on the diagram in which one consisting of three phases
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
input to human usage and the second made up of two stages of the liquid extracted to nature.

Initiating at the rain absorbance, raindrops
are collected
in dams which then
be transported
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
treatment plant for purification process in order to
be qualified
drinking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
to households. Other common ways to reuse rainwater
are applied
is to store tanks or recycle
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water
right at home.

At the
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water
extraction to nature, household wastewater will
be gathered
into plants to
be treated
carefully
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before
emitted into rivers.
Otherwise
, stormwater in homes can
be managed
professionally
in order to provide the sufficient materials for the completion of rainwater reuse cycle.
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IELTS academic The picture illustrates the way in which water is recycled in various forms from flows to air known as rainwater artificial cycle.

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  American English
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148 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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