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the picture illustrates how the proportion of positive feedback in distinct aspects by China learners in the period 2000, 2005 and 2005 As can be seen from the table, there was a decline in the range of modules offered, whereas the figures for technical quality, print resources, and the number of modules offered witnessed an upward trend. In addition, the data in infrastructure and teaching equipment still remain . It is noticeable that the resources of print attracted most choice of student over the period shown

the picture illustrates how the proportion of positive feedback in distinct aspects by China learners in the period 2000, 2005 and 2005 As can be seen from the table, there was a decline in the range of modules offered, whereas the figures for technical quality, print resources, and the number of modules offered witnessed an upward trend. In addition, the data in infrastructure and teaching equipment still remain. It is noticeable that the resources of print attracted most choice of student over the period shown n1xMl
the picture illustrates how the proportion of positive feedback in distinct aspects by China learners in the period 2000, 2005 and 2005 As can be seen from the table, there was a decline in the range of modules offered, whereas the figures for technical quality, print resources, and the number of modules offered witnessed an upward trend. In addition, the data in infrastructure and teaching equipment still remain. It is noticeable that the resources of print attracted most choice of student over the period shown
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