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The picture below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008.

The picture below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. oEJjD

The provided set of charts depict alterations of a museum from 1998 to 2008. Overall, it is apparent from the chart that the area has witnessed significant changes over the period. The museum was completely transformed with addition of numerous renovations resulting in luxurious infrastructure and improved facilities by the end of the given year. Focusing in the 1998, Garden was situated in the middle of a map, surrounded by three Permanent Exhibition, Cafe and some facilities. There was a cafe next to the Garden I. The southern part. Tickets entrance was located in between Temporary Exhibition Room of bottom left-hand corner and shop of bottom right-hand. In addition to that, bags and coats were seen next to shop. Moving in the 2008, Permanent Exhibition Rooms had been arranged in the column in the eastern part. Restaurant had been introduced in the top left-hand corner besides cafe and WC. Temporary Exhibition Room changed it's position, now it is behind the Restaurant. The most noticeable point was that the Ticket and Garden was only the feature which have remained untouched. However, cafe sitting area was added to the west of the Garden and Fountains in the west.

The provided set of charts depict alterations of a museum from 1998 to 2008. Overall
, it is apparent from the chart that the area has witnessed significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 over the period. The museum was completely transformed with addition of numerous renovations resulting in luxurious infrastructure and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 facilities by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 year.

Focusing in the 1998, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
Garden
was situated
 in the middle of a map, surrounded by three Permanent Exhibition, 'Cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"Café
Cafe
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 facilities. There was a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
next
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
Garden
 I. The southern part. Tickets entrance was located
 in between Temporary Exhibition Room of bottom This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
-hand corner and shop of bottom right-hand. In addition
 to that, bags and coats were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
next
 to shop.

Moving in the 2008, Permanent Exhibition Rooms had been arranged
 in the column in the eastern part. Restaurant had been introduced
 in the top This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
-hand corner besides
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 and WC. Temporary Exhibition Room This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
Did you mean "its" (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?its
it's
 position, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 it is behind the Restaurant. The most noticeable point was that the Ticket and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
Garden
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 the feature which have remained untouched. However
, 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 sitting area was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the west of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
Garden
 and Fountains in the west. 