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the graph below show the age structure of a European country from 1901 to 1981 and a prediction for 2022.

the graph below show the age structure of a European country from 1901 to 1981 and a prediction for 2022. ee0aA
The pie graph above elucidate the information regarding the age formation of a European country every forty years from 1901 to 1981 and the estimated number is 2021. Overall, it can be distinctly seen from the graph, age group above 85 people contributed the lowest segment, while age between 0-65 was the largest trend over the period. To embark with, as per the pie chart, the population of age group 0-65 accounted for 95% of a European country in 1901 and 1941, and experienced a decrease to 83% and 79% respectively in 1981 and also prediction year 2022. Moreover, the contribution from the age group between 65-85 and above 85 population remained constant in both year at under one in twenty and nearly 1%. secondly, the age structure of European country, age between 0-65 and between 65-85 was 4% and 13% in 1981 and had a slight growth of 2% in 2021. Furthermore, more than 85 population, which comprised approximately 83% of a European country in 1981, fell to 78% in the forecasted year 2022
The pie graph above elucidate the information regarding the
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formation of a European
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every forty years from 1901 to 1981 and the estimated number is 2021.

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from the graph,
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group above 85
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contributed the lowest segment, while
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between 0-65 was the largest trend over the period.

To embark with, as per the pie chart, the population of
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group 0-65 accounted for 95% of a European
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in 1901 and 1941, and experienced a decrease to 83% and 79%
respectively
in 1981 and
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2022.
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group between 65-85 and above 85 population remained constant in both
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at under one in twenty and
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secondly
, the
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structure of European
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,
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between 0-65 and between 65-85 was 4% and 13% in 1981 and had a slight growth of 2% in 2021.
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, more than 85 population, which comprised approximately 83% of a European
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in 1981, fell to 78% in the forecasted
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2022
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