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The picture below shows the mosquito life cycle

The picture below shows the mosquito life cycle MqJy9
The diagram illustrates the main stages of the mosquito life cycle. The are four main stages, beginning with lay eggs and ended up with develop into mature mosquito. At the first stage, a full-grown mosquito lay a large number of eggs on the water surface. Following, the eggs hatched into a larva in the water called ‘wriggler’. A mosquito larva looks like a small hairy worm, less than a ¼ inch long. Next stage, when the larva molts the fourth time, it becomes a pupa. As time flies, the pupa almost develops inside their cocoon, the head and tail have formed. Mosquito pupa do not eat or molt. Then, it removes the air tube, curbs most of its hair and forms special orgasm in one side of body. Finally, the pupa stays in that form for a short period of time before it develops into a mature mosquito. After it become a mosquito, the life cycle repeat itself all over again.
The diagram illustrates the main
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life cycle.

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four main
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, beginning with lay eggs and ended up with develop into mature mosquito.

At the
first
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, a full-grown
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lay
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a large number of
eggs on the water surface. Following, the eggs hatched into a larva in the water called ‘wriggler’. A
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larva looks like a
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hairy worm, less than a ¼ inch long.

Next
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, when the larva molts the fourth time, it becomes a pupa. As time flies, the pupa almost develops inside their cocoon, the head and tail have formed.
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Mosquito
pupa do not eat or molt. Then, it removes the air tube, curbs most of its hair and forms special orgasm in one side of body.
Finally
, the pupa stays in that form for a short period of time
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before
it develops into a mature
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mosquito
. After it become a
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, the life cycle repeat itself all over again.
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IELTS academic The picture below shows the mosquito life cycle

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6.5
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