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the urbanization that took place in the in the town called Eastminster between the years 1999 and 2009.

the urbanization that took place in the in the town called Eastminster between the years 1999 and 2009. XyW7w
The maps illustrate the urbanization that took place in the in the town called Eastminster between the years 1999 and 2009.  It is clear that this town experienced a significant transformation regarding residential, commercial and industrial developments throughout the period given. North of the river, which divides the town, the woodland in the northwest was turned into an adventure park. Moreover, by 2009 the large house with gardens had been replaced with a hotel and a golf course. More houses were also built encroaching on the park in the northeast. The other main development north of the river was the relocation of the school from the south bank of the river. The area south of the river experienced greater changes. To the east, the streets of houses were demolished to make way for blocks of flats. By 2009, where a public garden stood south of the old streets of houses, there were more houses. Further developments that occurred were the construction of factories and warehouses along the railway line together with the conversion of the school on the river into a new shopping complex. The final transformation was the expansion of the hospital west of the old-school situated on the river.
The maps illustrate the urbanization that took place
in the in the
town called
Eastminster
between the years 1999 and 2009.  It is
clear
that this town experienced a significant transformation regarding residential, commercial and industrial developments throughout the period
given
.

North of the
river
, which divides the town, the woodland in the northwest
was turned
into an adventure park.
Moreover
, by 2009 the large
house
with gardens had
been replaced
with a hotel and a golf course. More
houses
were
also
built encroaching on the park in the northeast. The other main development north of the
river
was the relocation of the school from the south bank of the river.

The area south of the
river
experienced greater
changes
. To the east, the streets of
houses
were demolished
to
make
way for blocks of flats. By 2009, where a public garden stood south of the
old
streets of
houses
, there were more
houses
.
Further
developments that occurred were the construction of factories and warehouses along the railway line together with the conversion of the school on the
river
into a new shopping complex. The final transformation was the expansion of the hospital west of the
old
-school situated on the
river
.
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IELTS academic the urbanization that took place in the in the town called Eastminster between the years 1999 and 2009.

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