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diagram for recycling plastic bottles

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the diagram below depicts the process of recycling of plastic bottles overall, it is clear that the process involves 9 steps, it starts by taking the plastic material to collect n the recycling factories then to creating new end products. the process starts by collecting all plastic bottles by trucks and taking them to a recycling store where a triage will be done by the employee concerning the good products that can be recycled, furthermore they are packed into compressing blocks and transferred into special crushing machines where the end products are immersed in the water for washing. after cleaning the material with water, they are inserted into machines that convert them into plastic pellets that will be heated to give raw materials that are packed into boxes so that can be given to fabricate new materials including clothes and bottles and other materials.
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the
diagram below depicts the process of recycling of
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plastic
bottles

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overall
, it is
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clear
that the process involves 9 steps, it
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starts
by taking the
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plastic
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material
to collect n the recycling factories then to creating new
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end
products.

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the
process
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starts
by collecting all
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plastic
bottles by trucks and taking them to a recycling store where a triage will
be done
by the employee concerning the
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good
products that can
be recycled
,
furthermore
they
are packed
into compressing blocks and transferred into special crushing machines where the
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end
products
are immersed
in the water for washing.

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after
cleaning the
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material
with water, they
are inserted
into machines that convert them into
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plastic
pellets that will
be heated
to give raw
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materials
that
are packed
into boxes
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so
that can be
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given
to fabricate new
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materials
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IELTS academic diagram for recycling plastic bottles

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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