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the proportion of traverlers used bus, car, bike

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The graph illustrates the proportion of traverlers used bus, car, bike to betake in European city from 1950 to 1990. Overall, it is evident that there was an improve in the use of cars for traverlling while the popularity of other modes of transport were declined since 1950. The percentage of users using cars increase significantly, its approximately from 7% in 1950 to 25% in 1970, and nearly reach to 40% in 1990. Nevertheless, the number of people using bikes reduced. Over 25% of commuters cycled in 1950, but it was considerablely deacreased to 8% in 1990. Its cearly to see that, the amount of population who walked fallen down from 35% in 1950 to 10% in 1990. The chart shows the favorites of people in European to cars, on the other hand bikes and walks couldnt be like that.
The graph illustrates the proportion of
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traverlers
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bus,
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, bike to betake in European city from 1950 to 1990.

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, it is evident that there was an
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improve
in the
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of
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cars
for
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traverlling
while the popularity of other modes of transport
were declined
since 1950.

The percentage of users using
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cars
increase
significantly
, its approximately from 7% in 1950 to 25% in 1970, and
nearly
reach to 40% in 1990.
Nevertheless
, the number of
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people
using bikes
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reduced
. Over 25% of commuters cycled in 1950,
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it was
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considerablely
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deacreased
to 8% in 1990. Its
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cearly
to
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that, the amount of population who walked fallen down from 35% in 1950 to 10% in 1990.

The chart
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the favorites of
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people
in European to
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,
on the other hand
bikes and walks
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be like that.
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IELTS academic the proportion of traverlers used bus, car, bike

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