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The pictorial description illustrates the process to produce chocolate.

The pictorial description illustrates the process to produce chocolate. L38L3
The pictorial description illustrates the process to produce chocolate. Overall, the whole manufestation could be devided into two main stages: on the farm and in the factory. From the start, when cacao pods turn red, which is a sign for the ripeness, they will be collected and peeled to remove the skin. Inside the pods, which is now exposed, there are white cocao beans that are extremely valuable as the main ingredient for a scumptious bar of chocolate. After all beans are gathered, they will be covered by banana tree leaves to result the fermentation to happen. When the beans are well fermented, they will be spreaded in the sunlight to dry, after which all will be stored in large sacks. The next step will be conducted in the factory. All the sacks of solid beans are transported by train or larry to the produce destination. When the freight arrives, it will be immediately roasted in maximum degree tempeture.
The pictorial description illustrates the process to produce chocolate.

Overall
, the whole
manufestation
could be
devided
into two main stages: on the farm and in the factory.

From the
start
, when cacao pods turn red, which is a
sign
for the ripeness, they will
be collected
and peeled to remove the skin. Inside the pods, which is
now
exposed, there are white
cocao
beans
that are
extremely
valuable as the main ingredient for a
scumptious
bar of chocolate.
After all
beans
are gathered
, they will
be covered
by banana tree
leaves
to result the fermentation to happen. When the
beans
are well fermented, they will be
spreaded
in the sunlight to dry, after which all will
be stored
in large sacks.

The
next
step will
be conducted
in the factory. All the sacks of solid
beans
are transported
by train or
larry
to the produce destination. When the freight arrives, it will be immediately roasted in maximum degree
tempeture
.
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IELTS academic The pictorial description illustrates the process to produce chocolate.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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