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The given picture reveals the water circulation procedure. Summarize the information, report the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given picture reveals the water circulation procedure. o5rkD
The chart illustrates the circulation of water in nature which is a complex and natural process. Overall, it is clear that there are three primary stages in this process, beginning with water evaporation and the formation of a cloud. The next step shows the water‘s journey after falling to the ground, and the process ends with saltwater intrusion. At the first step of the process, water evaporates into the air, as a result of the sun’s heat. It is estimated that 80% of total water vapour is taken from the ocean. Following this, a cloud is formed by the condensation of water vapour. In the next stage, the heavy clouds cause rain or snow. Water from the precipitation partly pours into the lakes or is absorbed into the ground. The surface runoff, which is made from rainwater, creates the groundwater and then flows back to the ocean without reaching the impervious layer. The final stage of the process is saltwater intrusion, where water from the ocean moves to the freshwater aquifers.
The chart illustrates the circulation of
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water
in nature which is a complex and

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natural
process.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that there are three primary stages in this
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process
, beginning

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with
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water
evaporation and the formation of a cloud. The
next
step
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shows
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the


water‘s journey after falling to the ground, and the
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process
ends with saltwater

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intrusion
.

At the
first
step of the
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process
,
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water
evaporates into the air,
as a result
of the

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sun
’s heat. It
is estimated
that 80% of total
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water
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vapour
is taken
from
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the


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ocean
. Following this, a cloud
is formed
by the condensation of
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water
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vapour
.

In the
next
stage, the heavy clouds cause rain or snow.
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Water
from
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the


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precipitation
partly pours into the lakes or
is absorbed
into the ground. The

surface runoff, which
is made
from rainwater, creates the groundwater and

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then
flows back to the ocean without reaching the impervious layer. The
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final


stage of the
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process
is saltwater intrusion, where
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water
from the ocean
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moves


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to
the freshwater aquifers.

IELTS academic The given picture reveals the water circulation procedure.

Academic
  American English
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171 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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