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The percentage of UK tax revenue and the total UK Government spending for last year

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The given a pie chart highlights the comparative study of the percentage of UK tax revenue and the total UK Government spending for last year. Overall, the maximum percentage of income tax and minimum figure of three taxes for last year, while the government spend higher amount for pensions and the minimum figures of general Government and transport. At the first glance, it can be seen from the Pie Charts that nearly half of income tax and less than 4% of National Insurance. The percentage of value added tax about 17% as compared to less than 6% of other taxe. The minority percentage of corporations tax about 8% and similar figure of fuel duty, business rates, and Council tax approximately 5% for last year. It can be seen second chart that the government spending 20% of pensions. It is a higher amount as compared to 3% of general Government and transport. The percentage of Healthcare which was about 18% and less than 6% of education and less than 1% spending amount for welfare. While, the figure was similar of defence and other spending which was approximately 7% and the government was spending less amount for interest payments on debt and protections about 6% and 5%, respectively.
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a pie chart highlights the comparative study of the
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percentage
of UK
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tax
revenue and the total UK
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Government
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spending
for last year.

Overall
, the maximum
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percentage
of income
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tax
and minimum
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figure
of three
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taxes
for last year, while the
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government
spend higher
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amount
for pensions and the minimum
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figures
of general
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Government
and transport.

At the
first
glance, it can be
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seen
from the Pie Charts that
nearly
half of income
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tax
and
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less
than 4% of National Insurance. The
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percentage
of value
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added
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tax
about 17% as compared to
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less
than 6% of other
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taxe
. The minority
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percentage
of corporations
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tax
about 8% and similar
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figure
of fuel duty, business rates, and Council
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tax
approximately 5% for last year.

It can be
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seen
second chart that the
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government
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spending
20% of pensions. It is a higher
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amount
as compared to 3% of general
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Government
and transport. The
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percentage
of Healthcare which was about 18% and
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less
than 6% of education and
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less
than 1%
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spending
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amount
for welfare. While, the
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figure
was similar of
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defence
and other
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spending
which was approximately 7% and the
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government
was
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spending
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less
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amount
for interest payments on debt and protections about 6% and 5%,
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The percentage of UK tax revenue and the total UK Government spending for last year

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