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the given bar chart shows number of age group of people taking ielts exam in uzbekistan between 2015 and 2019

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the supplied bar graph illustrates date about ielts exams taken by different age catagories of people in uzbekistan over 5 years periodOverall, It is clear shown that peple who were 16-19 years old had taken the most ielts from 2015 to 2019. while most of older people had unchanged from aproximately 7% during 5 years period. In addition, other age brackets had decreased between 2015 to 2019. The table data clearly shows that In 2015, 16 to 19 age bracets had increased from 38% to 42%, whereas the next brackets had collapsed aproximately 10 percent. on the other hand, in the third group the figures has slightly decreased from 11% to 9% among 24-30 years of humans, according to the last age group of people, there were not shown neither increase nor decrease till the very end of the spin
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IELTS academic the given bar chart shows number of age group of people taking ielts exam in uzbekistan between 2015 and 2019

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